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I’m Soul Eater. I’m 18 years old and I’m the coolest DeathScythe in the DMWA, thanks to my meister. My meister is Maka Albarn. She’s a bookworm, whiny, always crushing my skull with oversized books, and the list went on. And you know something? I wouldn’t trade her for anything in the universe.

Last night, something quite… unusual happened between me and her. We… well… man, I sound so uncool… we kissed.

We were watching this sappy corny love movie and you know how Maka feels about them: always telling her that love doesn’t happen like that and one always ends up hurt, bla bla bla (Spirit is one monumental douche, seriously). So I took her in my arms and kissed her.

“I’m not any kind of guy, Maka, and definitely not like your lousy cheating father. I’m the coolest guy who’s your partner that will always be there for you and protect you from anything.”

I left on that going to sleep. Though now, after I got dressed, I was a bit worried about how she'd react to my kiss now. No mission and no school today, so we were sort of stuck in the apartment.

It was my turn to cook breakfast, so I managed to do her favorite. Once ready, I called her out as I sat down and ate.

She finally came out. I know exactly what was on her mind. We stared at each other. And remained still. I mean, statue-still.
 
“Uh, hi.” I said in a very uncool way. Damn it...

“Hi…” She suddenly blushed. Wow… she was so cute right now.

We ate in silence, and it was very heavy in the air. Man, I had to break the atmosphere. But how? Then, I noticed a pale scar on her right arm. I smiled.

“What is it?” She asked me clueless.

I sat next to her and cherished that scar with my thumb. “I remember that scar. I would have been sliced in half if it wasn’t for you.” She smiled. All right, good! I know how I can lead that!

“That was a long time ago, Soul.”

“Yeah, I know. It’s just that it’s my duty to protect you, Maka.”

Her hand lied on a small scar on my arm. “And you’re always going over the line. I remember that one: it was during against that witch who tried to destroy Australia.”

“Yeah. It was a nice trip though.” I looked her legs and pointed another one on her left thigh. Man, her skin was so soft. “That one was… oh yeah! When we killed that kishin who wanted to be ‘remembered in history.’”

“Oh yeah, he was so mad at you for calling him uncool.” She giggled. That sound, I never get tired of hearing it. She eyed inside my shirt and put her hand on my chest. “That one… This is the one that means the most to me.” Her eyes were the cutest and most beautiful. Her smile… damn! An angel’s!

“For me…” I touched the side of her stomach. There was a large scar there done a few years back. She had nearly killed herself trying to save me. “This one.”

I pulled her towards me and kissed the scar's place. Well, the shirt was in the way, but who cares. It was symbolic. I meet her eyes and she was blushing again and she regained her focus on her breakfast. Damn it… I had to get her attention to finally say it.

“I really meant it, Maka.” She turned to me. I think she knew what I was talking about. “Yesterday, that kiss… I meant it, with all of my heart and soul. You’re everything to me, Maka. You’re the coolest girl I’ve met and… I want to be with you. And protect you for as long as I live.

I took a deep breath. It was now or never. “So, Maka, would it be cool for you to be my girlfriend?” Finally said it! Damn… my heart was beating like a giant stomping the ground!

She kept looking at me, eyes widened and nothing to say. Come on, say something, Maka!
She turned as red as an apple. Okay… I guess it was good, or not. She looked sideways and rubbed her arm. Man, I really was nervous now. So uncool!

“Why? She said. Finally something! “Why me, Soul? I mean… I’m not like these girls always chasing you. I’m a bookworm, I’m not really fun. I don’t have a big chest. I’m not really your type, even though I really want it to-”.

On that, she stopped talking realizing what she’d just said. And the grin of my face just couldn’t be any wider. Oh, God! Please tell me I heard right! I grabbed her in my arms and spun her around the room!

“You love me, don’t you? Please tell me you do!”

“I…” She blushed harder.

“Don’t make me tickle you, Maka!” I threatened amusingly.

“You wouldn’t-”

“Too late!” I tickled her like mad! She just tried to push me away, but I held her tightly against me. I wanted to hear it!

“Stop! Soul!” She kept on laughing.

“Say it!”

“I love you! I love you, okay?”

“You mean it?”

“Yes, yes! I love you! Now put me down!” And I did so. YES! SHE LOVED ME!

“Wow…” I didn’t know how I looked, but I was sure I was looking like a 4-year old at Candyland. So uncool. But I didn’t give a fuck about it. She loved me, that’s what mattered right now.

She raised one eyebrow, smiling. “You look so surprised…”

“Of course I am. But happy as well. Remember when we first shook hand, when we agreed to be partners?”

“Yeah.”

“On that same moment, I told myself that I had to protect you, no matter what. Maka, I never said or felt anything like that towards nobody before.”

She smiled to me like a high school girl with her dream crush. Actually, the situation was pretty much like that. And man, that girl knew how to make a man’s heart jump in flames.

“So…” She said. “Please, say it.” And I knew that exactly.

My forehead rested on hers. “Maka, I love you.” And she giggled in respond. So cute.

“Really?” She said softly staring dead in my eyes.

“Maka, if I have to put a ring around your finger right now to prove it, I will.”

“Seriously?” She jumped in surprised. And I nodded with a fanged grin. Trust me, I was really serious about it. “Nah, keep it for a few years later.” I shrugged.

“I’ll always protect and love you, Maka. I swear on my heart and soul.”

“I know you will, Soul. I’ll do the same, too.”

“Yeah, but since it’s my main duty about the protecting, I’ll try doing it for both of us. I gotta keep being cool, you know.”

“Oh, you!” She giggled. “So… what now, my boyfriend?” She giggled again.

“Well, my girlfriend…” Now, I switched to my lover mood. “I could just do this…” My lips landed on hers and they danced to each other.

So yeah, in the middle of the kitchen, we were just kissing, and kissing… more kissing. I lifted her in my arm, still kissing, hands travelling throughout our bodies. And we went to my room and… for the rest, that’s just not of your business ;)

THE END.
A fanfiction I wrote for the SoMa week. For Tuesday, the theme is PROTECTION so I wrote a fanfiction focused on that.

Story by me, :iconfallenangelgm:
Picture by :iconjazzie560:

The mentioned characters, Soul Eater and Maka Albarn, are the property of Atsushi Ōkubo.
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LOLerx4242564 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
I almost broke my IPad screen reading this ! ( every time  I read your SoMa fan art I want to bend my iPad while reading it until I heard a click from the side of my iPad screen ) I thought my iPad screen broke hehehe ( I keep checking on my iPad screen every time I finished reading your fan art ) 
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Thank you so much! :D
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LOLerx4242564 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
heehee 
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Sunset-Pony-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
AWW i love this!
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Glad you loved it! :D
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Sunset-Pony-Artist Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
welcome i think your really good at fanfictions
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LOLerx4242564 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
i love all your art !! XD especialy your SoMa fanfict !
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014
Thanks! :D
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay... I'm sick and miserable... But this just made my day ALL OVER AGAIN!!! >w<
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Thanks a lot! :D
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob! That one always gets me into a good mood!
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMFG! EVERY TIME I READ THIS I FEEL SO FREAKIN HAPPY!!!
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013
Thank you so much for re-reading it! :D
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I couldn't resist! It's awesome! >w<
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
SoMa! DUDE I LOVE IT I SWARE, THE DAY SOMEONE DISSES IT I WILL B HARTBROKEN!
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
 Thanks a lot! :D
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No prob! U can tell I'm a SoMa fan right?!
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013
Yeap! :D
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kykytiger Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
>w< Thanks! 
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StealUrSoul Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Writer
How cute... I think I just choked on my heart from the sheer adorableness... Is this even a word?
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Sounds good to me. Thank you so much! :D
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StealUrSoul Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome. You should write more...fluffy SoMa things... I would like to see how my heart really looks when I puke it out from all the cuteness (I should really buy a dictionary.)

Wow...this was gross. Ignore it.
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013
I'm actually writing a new one, but this one will be a bit more dramatic. :)
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StealUrSoul Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Student Writer
Whoohooo!! More Drama! Bring it on!
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Crona-Maka Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013

what they felt like:   Come With Me 

 

 

what my brother looked at me like when I read the last part to him:What did you just said?Buttermarshmallow addicted close the damn computer you aren't reading this anymore.

 I still read it thoughLugiala Goldenmeow 

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toribingori Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
It is my buisness pleas make a lemon to it?
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Lemon? You mean a SoMa erotic fanfiction? If that's the case, then read this: www.deviantart.com/art/7-Day-L…
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toribingori Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
i read it it was good
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JPAGAreias Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
So cute! Pikachus nuzzles cheeks 
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Su-nyan Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Student
YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE SoMa FANFICS. I'M BEGGING YOU, PLEASE !
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
Lol, when I can have some free to myself, I will :)
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Su-nyan Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student
Please, try it ! ♥
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Dreamer-of-Magic Featured By Owner May 30, 2013   General Artist
I love it :D
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moonrays64 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
great!
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Loricat123 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's soooooooo cute!!!! :3 I love your work.....!!!!!
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Thanks a lot! :D
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Loricat123 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
U deserve it!!!!! :3
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ishould-stab-u Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Now if this actually freakin happened! :iconmiseryplz:
Lovely story though :iconfanboyingplz:
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013
Thanks a lot! :D
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Artistic-Resonance Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg this is so cute! :D
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RedCheshire97 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Student Writer
Gor damn you Soul! lol, I loved it :) Soul is awesome, and you did a terrific job of getting him down!

PS: I used a Firefly term. Gor= God....just to let you know.....
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Thanks a lot! And it's okay! :D
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RedCheshire97 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Student Writer
whew! Cool :iconsoulsmirkplz:
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crazzyhaley Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I F*CKIN LOVE THIS
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Shikahr24 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
HOLY JESUS I LOVE THIS
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DenasiaTheKat Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was such a cute and amazing story. I love how you kept Soul in character with his cool antics, and Maka was in character as well with her shyness and nervousness about a relationship because of Spirit. This was wonderful. Fantastic work.
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
Thank you so much! I'm honored by your compliment! :D
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DenasiaTheKat Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're very welcome (: I'm glad you liked it :squee:
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Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brimstone: Ok Soul you have made me proud, finally getting the girl of your dreams. You have went from cool to way past cool. Congratulations kid. Dragonking17: Great job!
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FallenAngelGM Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Thanks for loving the story! :D
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